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<p>Ther<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">e</span> are <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">a </span>few cultural activists who have raised <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">campaigns </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">compaign</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">stating </span>that the prevention of their local cultures is only possible <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">if tourist activites are </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">to</span></span> banned <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">the tourist activities</span></span> in several areas while many other<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s</span> opposed theses thoughts. I totally agree that local cultures must be protected however, banning tourism is not <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">a</span></span> beneficial to our country, in addition , it will decrease the earning of our country and moreover , it also has <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">an </span>effect on <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">o</span>ur culture and values.</p><p>Through tourism people from <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">all </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">any</span></span> part<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s</span> of the world interact <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">with </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">to</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">the</span></span> other countries to discover the beauty of nature, thus have an intensive attraction to the local culture and values. By <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">the</span></span> increas<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">ing </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">e</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">of</span></span> tourist activities, <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">the </span>youth have increasingly <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">been </span>attracted to<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">ward</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">foriegner</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">to</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">create </span></span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> foreigners and develop a </span>relation<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">ship with them. </span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">As </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">as</span></span> a result they have found that they are now adapting <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">to </span>other cultures and values. </p><p>On the<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">r</span></span> other hand, tourism is <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">the</span></span> another <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">option that </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">alternative of a</span></span> developing countries <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">have </span>to increas<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">e </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">ing the worth of</span></span> their economy<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">.</span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">t</span></span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> T</span>he best example is Thailand<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">. Every </span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">has </span></span>year<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> Thailand </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">ly</span></span> earn 3 times more <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">than </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">then of</span></span> its actual budget of the country. and <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">has </span>become <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">of</span></span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">a </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">the </span></span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">for </span>hub <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">of</span></span> tourist<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s. </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">, t</span></span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> T</span>hey provide <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">luxurious </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">lexurious</span></span> facilities to their tourist<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s</span>. <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">s</span></span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> S</span>imilarly in Malaysia is also the another example of <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">a </span>tourist hub.</p><p>First of all, I believe that tourism never affected <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">on</span></span> our culture but also its a chance to motivate <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">foreigners </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">foriegner</span></span> to learn <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">about </span>our cultural values an<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">d</span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">d</span></span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> </span>mostly it is seen that<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> foreigners </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false"> my foriegners</span></span> respect the values of other culture<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s</span>. Secondly, Our youth pla<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">y</span> an important role <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">in </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">to</span></span> present<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">ing</span> the local culture in a positive way so that they will attract more<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change"> tourists</span>.</p><p>In conclusion, increas<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">ing </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">e</span></span> tourism to provide<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s</span> a great chance to increase our economy and it is a<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">n</span> appropriat<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">e</span> way to acknowledge <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">about</span></span> our culture and tradition<span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">s</span> <span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-0" class="fr-highlight-change">and </span><span data-tracking="true" data-track-id="pending-1-1" class="fr-highlight-change"><span data-tracking-deleted="true" class="fr-tracking-deleted" contenteditable="false">which results they</span></span> promote a positive message.</p>
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score my essay it is an opinion based essay.